Sunday, May 23, 2010
Two Clarity Pyramids---Mule & Dad
Clarity Pyramid
A poetry form designed and constructed by Jerry P. Quinn (FanStory.com writer Jer4Clarity).
Usually, this poem is center aligned when displayed. The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The title of the poem is the one-syllable word of the
first triplet, which is displayed in all capital letters. This line is followed by a two-syllable line,
and then there is a three-syllable line, both of which clarifies the definition of the poem, or is a synonym for the title.
The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based around a life event contained
within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title).
The last line is 8 syllables, and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first
word (title).
A poetry form designed and constructed by Jerry P. Quinn (FanStory.com writer Jer4Clarity).
Usually, this poem is center aligned when displayed. The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The title of the poem is the one-syllable word of the
first triplet, which is displayed in all capital letters. This line is followed by a two-syllable line,
and then there is a three-syllable line, both of which clarifies the definition of the poem, or is a synonym for the title.
The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based around a life event contained
within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title).
The last line is 8 syllables, and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first
word (title).
MULE
Donkey
Ornery
Stubborn animal
munches on grassy shoots
rubs rider against rock face.
“Revisiting Kalaupapa”
DAD
Father
Dominant
Tough and tenacious
insists on perfection
iron hands, warm caring heart.
“Dinner on table at five, sharp”
Saturday, May 22, 2010
Chewing Gum-- ABCdarian
Chewing Gum
Already
Been
Chewed gum—yuck I can’t get it off my shoe!
Darn these
Espadrilles Aunt
Fiona
Gus sighed
How is it that
I always manage to attract these sticky problems?
Just give me the damn phone
Kool-Aid’s fine by the way.
Let me just make this call
My cousin phoned he thinks the world owes him.
Now where is that number?
Oh-here it is
PU3-8879
Quite the situation
Really burns my butt
So stupid
That one, he still can’t get a job let alone walk and chew gum.
Unskilled and unorganized
Vacant, vain, vegetable
Worthless, wallowing, walrus
XY misfit, xenophobe
Yowling, yokel
Zigzagging through life like a zombie—SHIT-it’s busy!
Already
Been
Chewed gum—yuck I can’t get it off my shoe!
Darn these
Espadrilles Aunt
Fiona
Gus sighed
How is it that
I always manage to attract these sticky problems?
Just give me the damn phone
Kool-Aid’s fine by the way.
Let me just make this call
My cousin phoned he thinks the world owes him.
Now where is that number?
Oh-here it is
PU3-8879
Quite the situation
Really burns my butt
So stupid
That one, he still can’t get a job let alone walk and chew gum.
Unskilled and unorganized
Vacant, vain, vegetable
Worthless, wallowing, walrus
XY misfit, xenophobe
Yowling, yokel
Zigzagging through life like a zombie—SHIT-it’s busy!
Friday, May 21, 2010
Leaking L's
Leaking L’s
Labia’s labyrinth labeled, laconically lambasting lambda.
Lamenting lady lactates laboriously.
Labrador retriever laments lactic acid lacuna.
Loose language lassos lanky Luddite.
Lantana laced landscape, lauds lavish lawn.
Laxative launches leak, leaving leather-neck leery.
Left-handed liberalism legitimizes lenient levy.
Libra licks licorice lickety-split.
Life’s linoleum loves lemons.
Lint line-up links loge locale.
Lonesome lollipop looms lost.
Loquacious lord lavishes lovely lubricant.
Lucky lunatic lures lusty Lutheran.
Logic lulls loud Lithuanian librarian.
Lyric links lovelorn loggerhead longevity.
Loitering loincloth leaves luau loopy.
Lop-sided looter loses lunch.
Wednesday, May 19, 2010
Keening K’s
Keening K’s
Kelp keeps keel-boat kaput.
Kama’aina kamikaze keynotes komodo-dragon.
Knockwurst knish kills king-pin.
K--Kaleidoscope kidnaps karmic kick-stand.
Kennel kid kibbles kibitzer.
Kitty kisses knave, knees knight.
Kiwi-fruit kinetics knock-down kinsman.
Knicker kiosk kindles kaffee klatsch.
Kremlinologist kowtows kumquat krugerrand.
Koi kayo klutz.
Knowledgable kindergartener knits kooky knapsack.
Tuesday, May 18, 2010
Juxtaposing J’s
Juxtaposing J’s
Janitor jettisons jabberwocky jam-session.
Jazzy jaw-dropping jaybird jitterbugs jubilantly.
Joyful judge jots just journal.
Jury junkie judges juicy jellybean.
January juggernaut jumps June juncture juggling July.
Jacquard jukebox jostles junior.
Joe Six-pack’s journey jilts jingoism.
Joe Blow jousts Japanese jack-pot.
Jambalaya jalapeno jazzes jaunty jeopardy.
Jongleur jogs jonquil jungle.
Jockey joneses jeep jenny.
Monday, May 17, 2010
Refrigerator Logic--Six-word Memoirs
Rest in peace, once green veggie.
Activia rules in this frigid closet.
Shut the door, there’s a draft!
Cold closet seeking, warm leftover companion.
Be quiet, the eggs are sleeping!
Age matters, step to the front.
Seal your wrappers, eliminate dry rot.
Old dark companions, foment strange odors.
Soda shoots off mouth, fizzes out.
Check ice tray weekly, for blockage.
Sponsoring green—penicillin, apply in rear.
Sunday, May 16, 2010
Fire god
I took this photo last night as I watched the flames dancing in an outdoor pit!


Fire god
You are my drug,
the flame that licks my thighs
and sears me as you
order me about at your whim.
I am caught up in your glory.
I cannot see anything but you.
I do your bidding and loathe myself.
I am a puppet on a string.
I want you to be my friend
but you despise me.
You answer me
with your lies.
Your probing tongue
delivers cold venom,
courses through my veins
on a deliberate track that
hones in
on my heart and mind
with blinding speed,
screaming and
pleading for more,
ALWAYS MORE!
I want to get away from you
but you entice me
with your dual personality.
Your kind side shows itself
and then slips away.
I am riding high on a wave
fierce like a locomotive
lurching past my youth
plunging headlong into damnation
over and over again.
I am in a maze
forever trapped in time
locked away
for safekeeping
in a secret chamber
of your empty soul.
I open my mouth to
scream
and
no one hears.
My fingernails
leave a deep imprint.
Traces of my blood linger
and release another harbinger
intent on
Self-destruction.
My tomb lies broken,
my hairless corpse smolders,
my bones are encased in blistering bile.
Saturday, May 15, 2010
Interpreting I’s
Interpreting I’s
Idle iconoclast identifies Icelandic Ice-Man.
Indian ideology idealizes isolated isthmus.
Ill-mannered ibis impede ibex.
Impassioned idiot idolizes imagist.
Igloo irregularity ignites irate investigation.
Immobile iguana immolated, invoking intense image.
Impressionist imprints incestuous incisor.
Indecisive index finger incrusted indecorously.
Indifferent industry initiates injustice.
Insatiable inquisitive inn-keeper inspires insomniac.
Institute instructs intramural interplanetary intercourse.
Insurance intent insults intelligence.
Inner-ear interference invites invention.
Intoxicated intestine invalidates invasive invitation.
Islamic islander irradiates ISBN issue.
Itinerant IUD iterates itself in Italian.
Friday, May 14, 2010
Harpooning H’s
Harpooning H’s
Haiku habit harkens hard-bound harmony.
Hail hallowed halter hanging-on hopeful hangar.
Hands-on handyman harpoons harem.
Happy harp harbor hawks hashish harvest.
Head-banger headquarters heightens heady heat-stroke.
Hello –Herr Heimlich!!
Hilda heralds hemorrhoid hemorrhage halted-in hind-most hemisphere.
Hibiscus hiccup highlights high-technology.
Hexameter hints-at historic hideaway.
Hispanic Hopi Hindu hippy hooks humble Hungarian Hun hunchback husband.
Humor hyperdermic hydrates humanity.
Hyperbole hypnotizes hypersensitive hippo.
Writing Retreat
****Awarded the Rain Bird 2010 Kolekolea Honorable Mention in Poetry
I look forward
each month to return to
Hale Akoakoa
at Windward Community College
for my regular shot of
Lillian,
my special coffee mug
brimming
with her enthusiasm
compelled
to share
listen and
be challenged.
To explore-- this strange new country
called writing,
jam-packed with strong verbs, and syntax
bubbling from a practiced source.
To discover my own special voice.
As I venture
into uncharted
atriums and lanais
sheltered by banyan trees,
while grinding on
chocolate chip cookies
cantaloupes
and cherries.
To boldly go
on a
lyrical expedition,
serenaded
by
cellos
chickens
and a heart stopping
rendition
of cock a doodle doo.
I look forward
each month to return to
Hale Akoakoa
at Windward Community College
for my regular shot of
Lillian,
my special coffee mug
brimming
with her enthusiasm
compelled
to share
listen and
be challenged.
To explore-- this strange new country
called writing,
jam-packed with strong verbs, and syntax
bubbling from a practiced source.
To discover my own special voice.
As I venture
into uncharted
atriums and lanais
sheltered by banyan trees,
while grinding on
chocolate chip cookies
cantaloupes
and cherries.
To boldly go
on a
lyrical expedition,
serenaded
by
cellos
chickens
and a heart stopping
rendition
of cock a doodle doo.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Garnering G's
Garnering G’s
Gallic gadflies gaff gallant gamecock gauging galley.
Garrulous game garners gangplank.
Garden gargoyle garrotes garter snake.
Geisha gets gaudy gazebo, ghastly garden.
Ghetto gentrification gives gauche gatecrasher generous grade.
Gecko geek genially genuflects, gleaning gender.
Glacier glass gleams grace.
Goose gossip grades gradualism.
Group grinds gorp.
Grape gratis greets grimace.
Gross grub groans gruff grocer!
Guacamole gulch guarantees guerilla guidance.
Gutsy Gurkha grasps guava guitar.
Gesundheit--giant germ!
Gleeful girdle give-away, girlfriends giggle gladly.
Wednesday, May 12, 2010
Forking F's
Continuing on my journey through the alphabet!!
Forking F’s
Fabian faces-off fancy falcon famous for fatal faux pas.
Federal featherweight father’s feral feline.
Ferocious female finds fence favorite feature.
Flaccid ferret flashback’s following festival field-testing flannel.
Filipino film figure fillets Finnish fish, finds fleshy finger tip fondue.
Frisky flirt fondles florid floozy.
Flypaper font foments frenzied folk-art.
Foreign foreclosure foreshadows four-square foul-up.
Frantic fowl free frisky friend.
Frightful four-o’clock fracas fricassees frog.
Fugitive from fudge factory furthers futurism.
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Enlisting E’s
FYI--this month , my twelvth month of writing a poem a day,
I'm going through the alphabet--stretching a bit with my friend Merriam-Webster (dictionary)
Enlisting E’s
I'm going through the alphabet--stretching a bit with my friend Merriam-Webster (dictionary)
Enlisting E’s
Engaging elusive elands
enable
enable
elbow room elegance,
embrace emollient emissions.
Emir’s emerald
embroils emissary
eating enchilada.
Endangered enclave ends epic erection.
Elite ermine erase erogenous Elizabethan era evangelizing elk.
Egret elixir experiment explodes exponentially.
Egregious ethernet euphoria excludes
eighty ethnic European elders.
Evangelist excogitates exceptional expletive
exhibits eyeball.
exhibits eyeball.
Ezra extracts
elephantine eyewitness eliciting
elevator elegy.
Monday, May 10, 2010
Dealing D's
FYI--this month , my twelvth month of writing a poem a day,
I'm going through the alphabet--stretching a bit with my friend Merriam-Webster (dictionary)
Dealing D’s
I'm going through the alphabet--stretching a bit with my friend Merriam-Webster (dictionary)
Dealing D’s
Dainty debutante dabbles daily, dribbling drama.
Damask dandelion decor decoded, drawn dominantly defining domicile.
Defiant definition decrys democratic deficit, dividing district.
Diphthong diplomacy doesn't deter dedicated dairyman.
Dinosaur dioxin disease deceitfully delivered disguises dumping duct.
Disagreeable disc jockey drifts dreamlike, drenching druid.
Disclaimer discerned daring Darwin database.
Duplicity duress dysfunction delivers dauntless dead end.
Dry-run disarmament dumbfounds duenna duly dudgeoned.
Damask dandelion decor decoded, drawn dominantly defining domicile.
Defiant definition decrys democratic deficit, dividing district.
Diphthong diplomacy doesn't deter dedicated dairyman.
Dinosaur dioxin disease deceitfully delivered disguises dumping duct.
Disagreeable disc jockey drifts dreamlike, drenching druid.
Disclaimer discerned daring Darwin database.
Duplicity duress dysfunction delivers dauntless dead end.
Dry-run disarmament dumbfounds duenna duly dudgeoned.
Sunday, May 9, 2010
Culling C’s
Culling C’s
Captivating carambola caresses
caribou caricature.
Careworn caregiver carves casaba carp.
Caribbean carnage catapults cataclysm.
Cautious cauliflower caws celibacy.
Cerulean cetaceans challenge chimera.
Chimpanzee chimes chilly chorus.
Chrysanthemum cloisonné clearance closeout.
Close-knit clique clones club-sandwich.
Costumed Cossack counts coyote.
Creature craves credit.
Crocodile cultivates cyst.
Saturday, May 8, 2010
Bossy B’s
Bossy B's
Bill’s biplane
Bill’s biplane
buzzes blind blond bombshell.
Blowsy blueprint
boasts blue-cheese.
Blue whale boggles
bohemian.
Bonze boos boodle.
Bonny buxom bookworm
butters butcher.
Bumptious Bookie
bugs bookseller.
Boor borrows breast plate
brakes bramble branch.
Biological breach
breeds bucolic buddy.
Bulky buttock
bypasses Byzantine bystander.
Friday, May 7, 2010
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