Sunday, May 23, 2010

Two Clarity Pyramids---Mule & Dad

Clarity Pyramid

A poetry form designed and constructed by Jerry P. Quinn ( writer Jer4Clarity).
Usually, this poem is center aligned when displayed. The first triplet has 1, 2, and 3 syllables. The title of the poem is the one-syllable word of the
first triplet, which is displayed in all capital letters. This line is followed by a two-syllable line,
and then there is a three-syllable line, both of which clarifies the definition of the poem, or is a synonym for the title.
The second triplet has 5, 6, and 7 syllables. Its design is based around a life event contained
within the triplet which helps give a poetic view or outlook on the first line (title).
The last line is 8 syllables, and is in quotations as this line contains a quote that defines the first
word (title).


Stubborn animal
munches on grassy shoots
rubs rider against rock face.

“Revisiting Kalaupapa”


Tough and tenacious
insists on perfection
iron hands, warm caring heart.

“Dinner on table at five, sharp”

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